Monday, 7 January 2013

Foundations Drama - Revised Script 3 (Final)

This is the final revision of the script. As a group we feel this approach will work best:


EXT. Office Building. Day.
Matt walks out of the main entrance. He's wearing his best jacket, trousers and shoes. He looks nervous, keeps looking back up at building windows. As he gets further away he starts to smile and look more confident.

MATT (O.S)
Hi, I’ve uh… I’m here to uh see

RECEPTIONIST (O.S)
Mr Martin?

MATT (O.S)
No I’m uh Mr Donahan. No, no, yes. I’m here to see Mr Martin, I’m Mr Dona-

RECEPTIONIST (O.S)
Go right down the hall, then the door on your left.


EXT. Street. Day.
Walking down street. Bumps into woman, who is carrying lots of bags. Drops one.

MATT
Whoa, I'm sorry. Oh god, I’ll get that, I’m sorry/
Woman looks slightly shocked.

WOMAN (O.S)
No, I wouldn’t worry about it love, honestly.
MATT fumbles enthusiastically still

She awkwardly grabs her things and walks away. Matt carries on walking looking disheartened and nervous.

MR MARTIN (O.S)
Afternoon. Sit down, sit down. I’m Mr Martin.

MATT (O.S)
Hi, I’m Matt, uh Matthew.  It’s great to meet you. Really.

MR MARTIN (O.S)
So Matt. I know you know the position but I’m more interesting in your drive and personality. Why do you want this?

MATT (O.S)
Well, uh. Being an architect, it’s just something I've been wanting. Well, not just wanting, it’s just all ever seen myself doing, well it’s all I’ve ever wished I’d be able to do.

MR MARTIN (O.S)
Well that's good to hear. (sounding nonchalant)
Matt is feeling optimistic despite the interviewer’s obvious lack of interest.


EXT. Bus Stop. Day.
Matt walks up to the bus stop and sits down. He looks around and sees a tramp further down the street. He walks over and gives him the change in his pocket. About £3.50. He then continues walking as that was his bus money.
As if finally acknowledging Matt.

MR MARTIN (O.S)
Oh, you brought some sketches?

MATT (O.S)
Uh yeah, just a few designs. They’re not amazing, uh, but I really think, uh they show how uh creative I can be and uh-

MAN (O.S)
Yeah, yeah, I see. Ah, these are good, yeah.
Ext. Sandwich Shop. Afternoon.
Matt walks out with sandwich. Turns to look back inside.

MATT
Cheers
He walks down the street. Eating his sandwich looking very happy.

MAN (O.S)
So what kind of experience do you have?
Awkwardly and as if reading from an autocue

MATT (O.S)
Well I've studied for this at college and since then I've continued my studies independently, and I'm a quick learner. I'm confident I'll be able to work effectively here.

MAN (O.S)
Ah, great, great, great. (droning)Well I think that's all we need (staggered). We'll get back to you shortly Matt. Thank you for coming.

MATT (O.S)
Thanks so much for seeing me, I really appreciate it.


INT. House. Afternoon.
Matt enters his house. He puts everything down and rushes to his phone. There are two messages. He presses to hear them.

MATT’S BROTHER (O.S)
Ah, you’re not answering. How’d it go man? Just gimme a bell or summat and tell me how it went n that. Really hope it was alright mate, you deserve it. I’ll see you in a bit then I s’pose. Good luck

Matt has a broad, confident smile, nodding.

MATT
Cheers man

MATT'S BROTHER (O.S)
You back yet Mr bread winner? Gimme a ring and we’ll go out or summat, drink your first real wage away before you’ve got it? Plan? Surely.

MATT (quietly)
Sounds like a good plan.

He waits for the next message. Nervousness coming back onto his face. 

MAN (O.S)
Mr. Donahan, this is Sonet on behalf of MR MARTIN, just in regards to your interview with us this morning. We'd like to say that we were very impressed with your interview and your work. Unfortunately, you’re not what we’re looking for at this time. We wish you all the best in your future endeavours . Goodbye.

Matt just stares at the phone. His shock apparent on his face. He puts his hands on the table and leans on it. His head down. His fists clench. Then he falls back onto the sofa, looking defeated.

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